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About Me Member Deviously Deviant hanna-baccaFemale/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 9 Months
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Burn Brighter

Sun May 31, 2009, 1:11 AM
a granite centre
lies inside, lashed
in place too heavy to shift,
weighing down hard
with the force of a tide
and conviction of the soul.
But something calls,
some darker foe
reaches deep in the breast,
tempting as treacle
for an entrance to this cavernous dwelling.

But rock denies passage,
freezing with compulsion
to an icy shard that cuts all illusion.
Yet this works two ways:
with that that hides within,
now confined and controlled,
contained in cold contempt.

The world stops,
one breath in taken,
the rushing spectrum floods the mind
with feelings, emotions; sensation is numb.
Overcome,
blinded, deafened
in bliss.
Hearts lighten; pain is eased
as eyes now shimmer with brimming peace,
falling to earth in joyous crystal.

For a flame has ignited,
exciting my vision,
enticing with the promise of
a hope rekindled.
The glower now smolders
melting ice to warm fuel
for the raging fire,
now burning forth for all.

  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: Beastie Boys - Slow and Low

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    :iconlorduberham:
    Good to see you on here Hannah, some nice stuff in your gallery already!

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    :iconhanna-bacca:
    thanks. now it's just another site i have to avoid getting addicted to, the upload process is way longer than facebook, and i plan to sell my actual work rather than this method anywaysso its only for show when i can be bothered. it's nice to see how other art is going i suppose, yours is always pretty interesting actually, i dont know many artists who do anything similar to your style.
    :iconlorduberham:
    Thanks, although my 'style' is based on not really being that fond of or good at colour work!

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    :iconlemonadegrenade:
    Well hi there! Thanks for watching me! Hope you're alright, I'm loving your work. c:
    :iconhanna-bacca:
    howdy, i be staying cool, deviantart=slow but addictive :S
    :icongmockler1:
    Thanks for the favorite!!!
    :iconicklerayofsunshine:
    Hannah Hannah Hannah~

    *steals your comment virginity* 83

    Thakns for the watch; I be watching you in kind. =P
    :iconhanna-bacca:
    deviantart takes way too long to upload stuff!! and heeeyyyyy.

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